Audience: Movie Executives
Purpose: To show how the movies themselves are changing as
well as the industry in a negative way due to the advancements in technology. This
is a more informal take on the introduction.
A commonly held belief is that advancements in technology must
be a good thing for the entertainment industry; but I am here to tell you
otherwise. So many times the media gets
caught touting/plugging the next big “IT”, whether it’s the new IPhone, the
next generation Gaming System, or the newest way to experience movies as seen
with IMAX 3D. I am a huge fan of movies.
I enjoy all types of movies; horror, comedies, dramas, comic book adaptations,
and yes, even romantic movies. At first glance it may be difficult to see the
negative ways these types of developments really impact the entertainment industry,
especially movies. So let me show you
some of the ways movies are impacted. Today,
the amount of time movies remain at the Theater Box Office is getting shorter
and shorter because studios want to release them on Premium Home on Demand quickly
followed by their DVD release, causing the movie theater experience to change and
affect attendance. The premise of
classic movies from the past are no longer plausible, so movies we all know and
love, like National Lampoon’s Vacation won’t be made because it no longer makes
sense for a family to get lost on a road trip when their Smart Phone has a Global
Positioning System (GPS) or their car has navigation. It is because of these advancements that
Hollywood has run out of good ideas for movies and is left with the need to
constantly “reboot” franchises such as Spiderman and Total Recall or rehash the
same storylines over and over again. In
speaking with friends about the recent release of the new Spiderman movie,
several stated they were hesitant to go see the movie because Universal Studios
had just finished the Spiderman Trilogy only a few year back. While the movie was still successful, it was
definitely impacted by this sentiment and sense of lack of originality. Technological
advancements are negatively impacting “Hollywood” and the movie industry.
Audience: People working in the movie industry
Purpose: To show how the advancements in technology
negatively impact the movie industry.
The Hurt Locker, which one the Oscar for Best Picture, only
made forty-nine million dollars at the box office while being downloaded seven
million times on uTorrent prior to its theatrical debut. File sharing, do you know
what it is? How it works? If so, what are you going to do to prevent it from
happening again? This is just one of the
many examples of how the advancements in technology have negatively impacted
the movie industry. Movie studios want to shorten the amount of time a movie
remains at the box office and release it on Premium Home on Demand. Doing this
would result in the movie theaters loosing a lot of revenue. Also have you ever
thought about the movies themselves? What makes a great movie, the story. The
Blues Brothers, a cult classic, centers around two friends trying get the band
back together for a gig. They travel around the country on a road trip making
lasting memories but in our time we wouldn’t have to travel across the country
to get into contact. We could simply just Facebook message them. I will show you how technological
advancements are negatively impacting the movie industry.

I felt as if the first introduction would be better used in a body paragraph as an argument for your topic. The beginning started off good and interesting like an introduction but then it switched I thought. I liked the second one better because you used examples that people can relate to. The thesis in the second one was telling us how you would show us, which I liked. Both thesis's were short and sweet which I liked.
ReplyDeleteYes, it is possible to break up an introduction into more than one paragraph . . . and the thesis doesn't always have to be in the first paragraph.
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